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In conclusion, although Muldoon’s article is effective in parts due to its convincing tone, there are numerous flaws which affect its credibility. At times, it appears that the author is biased. Furthermore, her article presents only the positives of globalisation. She frequently ignores ideas and examples which present the other side of the globalisation debate, and these points detract from the strength of her argument. Looking forward, it seems inevitable that the world will continue to become more diverse. However, how we choose to manage the effects of this needs to be addressed not only at a governmental level, but also within individual communities. The local population of any area can embrace the effects of a globalised society, but should also actively oppose the aspects which are not suited to it. Overall, it appears that POLLUTION will continue in this world of technology.