Error+correction

In the writer’s final __argument__, he asks the reader to “consider the enormous benefits young people bring to their home countries”. To support this, he quotes Maximilo Soliven, who says “ if you speak English, you can be the boss”. She supports her point/idea/argument with many reasons, such as…. She uses words like “shortsighted” and “naïve” to convince the reader that…. She might be overgeneralised. Her argument might be overgeneralised. Her argument is/seems to be overgeneralised. However, there are not so many opportunities………. The main advantage of learning English in English speaking countries can get various benefits. __ The main advantage of learning English in English speaking countries __ ** __ is that __ ** students can get various benefits. Students who learn English in English speaking countries can get various benefits. The idea is that “if you learn English, you can be the boss”. The idea that “if you learn English, you can be the boss” is exaggerated, because… The writer states/believes (not ‘clarifies’) that young people who live and study abroad can get a lot of benefits. The author presents (noun phrase – the idea/the concept/the suggestion) that people who study overseas… The author presents (speaks/talks) positively about studying overseas. In the article ‘Studying Overseas’ written by ** Dr. M Smith, he/the writer/the author  ** shows that the best way to learn English is to study in an English speaking country. The author might set up an inaccurate cause and effect relationship. The author seems to have set up an inaccurate….  1. tense  2. overcautious